I read over it and like most of it. Federal employees should not be telling platforms to take things down just because they conflict with federal policy. Not only should it be done by EO, it should be written into federal law.
The only part I'm not too keen on is using §230 to manipulate what private websites can and can't censor even without the influence of government. If a website only wants to allow a certain kind of content, that's their right.
Hell, if HiC starts posting d1ck pics, don't you want Dion to be able to pull them down? lol