Man, thats an interesting interpretation.This is an unfortunate passage as I believe it cleanses the minds of those in wealth... there is no regret or concern when Jesus himself words it in such a way as to make one assume the poor are poor for reasons that are either their own fault or God's will.
Jesus speaks all throughout the NT about feeding and caring for the poor, and loving one anther. Respect your interpretation of that passage, but gotta disagree with you.