Burnt Orangeman
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In Slither I just love the neighborly dialog in the barn. Yeah, she may have turned into a monster, but she's our neighbor and therefore our monster. Interesting and clever sociological twist.
INT. OLD BARN - NIGHT
Bill and Wally move cautiously but quickly inside. But
they stop suddenly, in disgust and horror.
BILL
Oh...
It's Brenda. And she doesn't look good. Her weepy little
head is stuck to the front of a huge fleshy orb, which is
what her body has become. This enormous ball of flesh is
nine or ten feet tall. Vestigial fingers protrude from
the sides. She is utterly immobile. Her flesh sloshes,
slightly and constantly; a thousand snakes seem to be
slithering beneath her thin, tight, bruised skin. The
woman is in great pain. She SOBS. Her mouth and chin
are stained with blood.
The posse and Starla enter behind Bill and Wally and are
equally astounded.
OLDER COP
Oh, ****!
They see the source of the awful stench:
54.
Brenda is encircled by the rotting carcasses of cows and
horses and forest critters. They are mostly skeletal, as
they have been largely devoured. They're swarming with
flies. The stench is so bad the posse cover their faces
with the bottom of their shirts.
The SOBBING Brenda looks desperately at Bill and Wally.
BRENDA
Something's wrong with me.
WALLY
Uh, yeah.
Bill and Wally get in a little closer.
BILL
Brenda, um...
BRENDA
I didn't want no one to be seeing
me like this.
As the posse inch closer, Brenda's whole body suddenly
LURCHES FORWARD a bit -- like whatever's inside her is
trying to get out and to the posse. Brenda SCREAMS in
agony.
The posse jump back. They stare as she recomposes herself.
BRENDA
How are my boys, Bill? Are they
all right?
BILL
Boys are fine, Brenda. Uh, what's --
what's happening here, exactly?
BRENDA
I'm so ******* hungry, Bill. I'm
so hungry. I just never knew
anybody could be so hungry.
Brenda tries to smile in a way she might charm her Daddy
into giving her candy. This is creepy as hell.
BRENDA
Would you mind handing me a piece
of that possum there at your feet?
Little bit?
INT. OLD BARN - NIGHT
Bill and Wally move cautiously but quickly inside. But
they stop suddenly, in disgust and horror.
BILL
Oh...
It's Brenda. And she doesn't look good. Her weepy little
head is stuck to the front of a huge fleshy orb, which is
what her body has become. This enormous ball of flesh is
nine or ten feet tall. Vestigial fingers protrude from
the sides. She is utterly immobile. Her flesh sloshes,
slightly and constantly; a thousand snakes seem to be
slithering beneath her thin, tight, bruised skin. The
woman is in great pain. She SOBS. Her mouth and chin
are stained with blood.
The posse and Starla enter behind Bill and Wally and are
equally astounded.
OLDER COP
Oh, ****!
They see the source of the awful stench:
54.
Brenda is encircled by the rotting carcasses of cows and
horses and forest critters. They are mostly skeletal, as
they have been largely devoured. They're swarming with
flies. The stench is so bad the posse cover their faces
with the bottom of their shirts.
The SOBBING Brenda looks desperately at Bill and Wally.
BRENDA
Something's wrong with me.
WALLY
Uh, yeah.
Bill and Wally get in a little closer.
BILL
Brenda, um...
BRENDA
I didn't want no one to be seeing
me like this.
As the posse inch closer, Brenda's whole body suddenly
LURCHES FORWARD a bit -- like whatever's inside her is
trying to get out and to the posse. Brenda SCREAMS in
agony.
The posse jump back. They stare as she recomposes herself.
BRENDA
How are my boys, Bill? Are they
all right?
BILL
Boys are fine, Brenda. Uh, what's --
what's happening here, exactly?
BRENDA
I'm so ******* hungry, Bill. I'm
so hungry. I just never knew
anybody could be so hungry.
Brenda tries to smile in a way she might charm her Daddy
into giving her candy. This is creepy as hell.
BRENDA
Would you mind handing me a piece
of that possum there at your feet?
Little bit?